a bride in pride smiled very wide
started her most awaited speech
says that she was lucky to find one
but was blessed to be born to one
who loved her, cared her unconditional
who gave her security and gave the meaning of life
who held her hand in every dusty storm
oh! there are no words to describe the first man of her love
yes, sometimes he behaved tenacious
But his never ending love is ostentatious
And I’ll be forever be a tenant of his heart.
this man! Who could never be replaced in her apart
sobbing, pointing towards her dad
the bride said in pride!
I love those words from the bride, that is how it is at the beginning. I pray those words would not change as time goes on.
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Yes!
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Gorgeous writing! And so refreshing to read something that actually refers to the Daily Post prompt too. ❤
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Thank you Madeline Scribes!! Matters a lot to me!!!!!! 💜
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Fab👏👏
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Thnx revaaaaaaa!!
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good….the end was great….though unexpected….
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I only wrote what I imagined… How it would feel like ☺… Thnx!!
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reallygood, i love it! a bride in pride
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Thanx Tornade!!
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Excellent poem, great read!!😁
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Thnx!!
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